A long and twisted tale.

The First Paragraph

Ah the first paragraph of an epic story – how do you begin?
Do you introduce your character, do you drop the reader right into the action, do you go for some clever technique to hook the reader?

1st paragraph

Each word is agonised over, should the city be bulgesome? Is the alliteration too much?
Can you read the word ‘Razzles’?

Anyway – for now – this is how it begins.
Maybe that will change.

 

Page 1 is HERE.

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2 responses

  1. What a wonderful first paragraph.
    Could a book begin any better?
    I certainly couldn’t write a better opening.

    October 4, 2013 at 3:08 am

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