A long and twisted tale.

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The First Paragraph

Ah the first paragraph of an epic story – how do you begin?
Do you introduce your character, do you drop the reader right into the action, do you go for some clever technique to hook the reader?

1st paragraph

Each word is agonised over, should the city be bulgesome? Is the alliteration too much?
Can you read the word ‘Razzles’?

Anyway – for now – this is how it begins.
Maybe that will change.

 

Page 1 is HERE.


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The First Page

What makes an effective first page?

Should it be colourful? Filled with action? Funny?
Page 1v

Page 2 is HERE.


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The Second Page

Page 2v

Chapter 1 is HERE.


Razzles The Knohm

Razzles

Razzles the knohm.

Razzles is a successful resident of the huge UnKnown World city Tullgotha.
He has a love for the easy life and enjoys a rather emotional temperament.
Unbeknownst to him he is about to become embroiled in a quest that will take him far from his comfortable home and test his negligible abilities to the full.

A somewhat frangible folk, knohms are often skittish, finicky and given to bouts of excessive gambolling.