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Razzles the knohm.
Razzles is a successful resident of the huge UnKnown World city Tullgotha.
He has a love for the easy life and enjoys a rather emotional temperament.
Unbeknownst to him he is about to become embroiled in a quest that will take him far from his comfortable home and test his negligible abilities to the full.
A somewhat frangible folk, knohms are often skittish, finicky and given to bouts of excessive gambolling.